Hold me,kiss me..
My frenetic lover,
But don't keep reminding me,
that for the last time I'm living truly..!!!
Does your change to a devious love,
shows mine,more moral...?
But how could I celebrate on my holiness,
if my Adam is dying...?
Yeah,I'm the ancient lover,undying soul..
But,neither I ate the fruit nor did i request..
Then who's the serpent beneath the flower,didn't let you to take rest??
As you kept yourself busy in molesting the virtue
strongly I stayed away from all these undue..
Take your evil soul away from me,
I'm seeking for the innocent lover,that you used to be.
The pain has been described beautifully. every line shouts the feeling of garbing your last hope
ReplyDeleteshinchin... its awesome.. and after this my conclusion.. u're a vampire-lover.. :P
ReplyDeletei had goosebumps after reading this...wonderful work.keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteShinjana i read you last poem also..and i love the raw passion of love that you are able to express in your poems..good work girl...looking forward to more such poems :)
ReplyDeleteI'm overwhelmed with your compliments.Thanks a lot guys for liking my poems and encouraging me.I'd try my best to write better.. :)
ReplyDeleteYes,Payeldi, sometimes it feels great to love a vampire.. it gives love,lovely pain and talent too , to write down such stuff !! :P
good one
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